An update on TTO343:
The newest chapter The return is almost done and should be done at some point in the month. Once the first act of TTO343 is finished ( 5 or 4 more chapters left ) I will go though them all and edit them for mistakes, plot holes. And just generally improving the writing somewhat. Now for a teaser of the next chapter. Keep in mind this is a work in progress. Feedback is appreciated.
Chapter 10: The return. The time had come. For what seemed like months Halogeek and his nine loyal Disciples continued to trudge though the ruins of the Hub. Light flared on and off, fires raged and Televisions emitted small fountains of white hot sparks from their ruined screens. Weapons ready and loaded, grenades ready on demand, they were ready for anything. It was now or never. “I’m not telling you anything!” Boss repeated to the Terrorist leader who menacingly towered over him. “Correction if I may?” The leader said as he grabbed Boss by the throat. “You do know something and you will tell us something!” The leader replied as he then tightened his grip over Bosses throat. “I will, I will not betray Red “Allow me to show you how we deal with scum like you then” The leader then released his grip over Bosses throat and proceeded to slam Bosses head against the wall, then pushed him onto the ground soon after. “Resistance is futile, the ways of old are gone, you would be wise to subscribe to the new program if you wish to survive”