King of Winter

So I'm writing my first chapter story. And I want some feedback on what people think about it. It is called "Royal Blood" and I have the first chapter published so far. It is found here: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Lionel/1002277/ Please, please, please, please leave your thoughts down below in a post. I will appreciate it a lot. Anything is appreciated.

According to my lurking, for the past week there has been a lot of arguments in the shout box. I'm glad that there will be more supervision on it, hopefully things will calm down.

Alright so i have decided to make a new Flash animation and actually finish it. As a brief summary, it is about 4 people that got teamed up on Team SWAT interacting with each other. These are the characters: DasBaconator: This character is mostly chill but easily enraged and gets really extremely uncomfortable in situations he does not like. FerrariPie: This character is a hot-head and rages for no reason except because he doesn't get what he wants. He is also very hurtful . Also has a British accent. xX_DarkAngelDeamon_Xx: This character is childish and gets on people's nerves. MissChief: This is our female gamer. She is intellectual but uses her smarts just to argue and is also very stubborn. We need voice actors for these four characters. If you are a good voice actor, and wish to have a role in this animation, PM me which character you wish to be and I will send you a link with the script. NOTE: Currently we just have a teaser written out. The only characters that have a line is FerrariPie & DasBaconator which is one sniffle, one cough, and two words. Before you apply there's a few things you should know. Nothing bad, just that when you record your parts, I require for multiple recordings of it at different speeds, slow, medium and fast. Each episode will be 1:30 - 2:30 minutes. So since 1 minute = 1 page, it won't a lot to record at all. Now on to the next jobs. It's been so long since I have drawn on Flash and I have become horrifyingly terrible at it. So I am also asking for people to design the characters and background and i will animate them. It won't be much to design after the teaser since I will be using the same ones through out the rest of the show. If you wish to do this, PM me. Also I might want to made it's own theme song so if anything is up so make a nice rhythm, PM me. So yea, if I can get a good team of designers and voice actors and a possible musician, this will be very simple to do. P.S. There is not a writer position, me and my friend will handle that, and the animating, but I was thinking to myself that I could base it off situations in the shoutbox (how people interact and all). So if you have any ideas, fell free to PM them. P.S.S. The music role has been taken by none other than our forum musician...TheDragonSlayer

I watched it a while ago...now I want a season 2. haha

Everyone is leaving. laterz, good luck.

Omg I forgot to watch the last episode yesterday!

Congrats bullet!

I will hide and let the covenant and flood take it out on each other then i will be last man standing lol

Be Less Attractive Reginald Griffin..? lol RAWR

SANGHEILI AND PROUD

Handle All Loose Ostriches USER

Theres a new Repopulate Halo 3 day http://www.343industries.org/forum/topic/10950-repopulate-halo-3-day-2/ <----

Never thought about that, It'll be cool to have the covenant fighting on your side haha.

The Official Facebook Page for Repopulate Halo 3 has announced that they are going to have a second Repopulate Day which will be on Sept. 1st. "The official Operation "Populate Halo 3 Again" is happening September 1st. That's 9/1/12. We might create a second Facebook page for this event to avoid confusion, but please ignore any unofficial videos that you may see floating around that indicate a different date. I will be updating the YouTube channel in the next week or so with a video update on the new event, but for now we have to spread via word of mouth and Facebook. Help us spread the word." https://www.facebook.com/populatehalo

That is not called a Killing Spree, a Killing Spree is when you get 5 kills without dying, im talking about getting 5 kills without dying on 1 individual person.

im about to explode lol

Really? you haven't? you're the very person i know that hasnt haha.

Just became dedicated today

So yea, this right here is my 500th post, making myself a dedicated member. I was wondering if just should be a regular common post or a nice quality one. So I thought and though and I decided to do this. A history lesson of my membership. So yea, YOLO. Usually, I don't interact with other people through the computer that I don't know in person, and not making me stick around as much because of that. This site was different though. I joined August of 2011, didn't start doing anything until December? yes. During that time (with the horrific username of "I Will Cum for 343") I observed the shout box and looked at posts. Everyone seemed very friendly, so I decided to use the shout box and post myself (YOLO). Eventually I started to meet people and make friends. So yea, here you have a very brief and vague story of how I became about in this forum. I stopped it here because it's Sunday and I am lazy, apologies. Now one last thing, I will like to compliment Twam in creating and maintaining such a wonderful forum I enjoy very much. Also the rest of the members too for being awesome haha. P.S. thumbs up for double YOLO [or will you rather have a brohoof (\ ]?