I_Make_Big_Boom Posted March 4, 2016 Report Share Posted March 4, 2016 [deleted] 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caboose The Ace Posted March 5, 2016 Report Share Posted March 5, 2016 An intruging first showing SD. Good job and well done. I admit, I am intrugied on where the story is going and the first chapter has me somewhat hooked. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Kittens and Gibberish Posted March 5, 2016 Report Share Posted March 5, 2016 Damn! That got me...well, damn. I want to know more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I_Make_Big_Boom Posted March 5, 2016 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2016 I don't know what the deal is with the off-kilter orientation of some sentences, and words. They get cut off instead of going to the next line. Thanks allot, editor. Oh, and thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I_Make_Big_Boom Posted March 10, 2016 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2016 I should iterate that this story has nothing to do with Halo. I put this here by accident, and am currently waiting for a Mod to move this to a place more appropriate. So if you're thinking this is supposed to be intertwined with some OC Spartan character then you're going to be disappointed. The story is standalone, and has lore spanning a fictional universe I created. The more you know (whoever cares anyway). 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Kittens and Gibberish Posted March 11, 2016 Report Share Posted March 11, 2016 You should copy right this stuff... Its not a compliment, I mean you literally have to copyright it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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