Caboose The Ace

Banned.

As Ruff said judge with your hands and eyes. Go play the beta still not enjoy it, fair enough but try to go into H5 beta with a open, positive mind-set. Halo 5 really strikes balance between the 2 Halo communities The reach/H4 one and the H2/h3 one.

^ Ubisoft is the one that does that now

Yep now for the good the bad and the questionable The Good. Interesting story Quickly starts the story off The Bad The writing is very simplistic with very little describing words. You rarely describe the situation. Real short chapters. My rule for chapters personally is try to make it as long as the last. And by that I see how many lines I have typed up. Nothing is really established so far like characters etc The questionable. I doubt scholastic would publish this. Not because of what I said above but because of copy right. Overall it was alright. Nothing amazing but don't give up writing. 5 tips for writing 1 Take regular breaks 2 Look at what other people have done and see if you can take any ideas from that ( like writing style, how they present their work etc ) but try and make it your own. My writing style is inspired by Mathew stover, but I have added my own twist to it with a bit of James luceno in there for good measure. 3 Take feedback and apply it to future chapters. 4 Don't be afraid to share 5 Look back at what you have wrote and see how you can improve it.

Fanfiction is Fan fiction, or fanfiction (often abbreviated as fan fic, fanfic, or simply fic), is a broadly defined fan labor term for stories about characters or settings written by fans of the original work, rather than by the original creator. Works of fan fiction are rarely commissioned or authorized by the original work's owner, creator, or publisher; also, they are almost never professionally published. < Thanks Wikipedia! So yes you are writing fan fiction. So can you just post a few full chapters for us to see now? In your status you said the story have 18 chapters and was having good reviews so can you show us?

Not Banned for presenting your reasons.

Agent? wait you have an agent for a fan fiction? Dude its the damm internet what are we going to do with it?!

But if you don't have Internet then how are you here? I presume 3g or 4g.... but I would really suggest you get Internet..... Anyway you can buy Halo nightfall standalone sometime after the series has ended and it comes out on dvd.

Once again.... I would love to see much more of this. No reason to hide it.

The writing was a little basic for my tastes but I still liked it. Though Lasky sweared too much and he should have given Jenkins a chance to defend himself. Still it was good, hope to see more.

.... Why would I try to steal someone's fan fiction? I merely want to read it.....

Alright then.... *looks around*

Well.... cant you just post a few chapters? It would be nice to read and may help improve my writing.

Yes please.

Wait? So am I going to get to see a chapter?

You need to post five times.

I would prefer chapter one.... But if I had to vote from the ones you set out for me... Chapter 8 first encounter.

Well if you have written them please post them. I would love to read them for enjoyment and to see if I can improve my own writing.

Sadly I cannot do anything. As this place is a forum for fans and unless 343 stalk us here all the time then im pretty sure they are nowhere around here. Halowaypoint the biggest hive of scum and villainy this sector of the known Galaxy ( 343s official site ) is where those lurkers hang out. Btw I have never heard of 343 doing what you request to my guess would be they will not do it. And finally 343 is aware of the issues you are having and is trying to fix them as we speak.

Banned because he didn't display them. My reasons for banning you is because I want to.

^ Times have changed since then. The Covenant has disbanded. Elites have changed because of this so why not Brutes. As Elites and Brutes no longer have the ability to make half decent arms and armour. So must fall back on other things. Such as the Storm rifle ( that attempts to replace the now rare Plasma rifle )

Banned for having no reasons.

Bans are not a case by case basis. It would be angry at heck if there was someone like that in the game. Losing the game for us. And I would report. How did I know he was a five year old? and even if I did. I still might have done anyway. Besides it is only a temp ban, just don't let him play MM again.... and what would these safeguards be exactly? No, he should play Campaign, forge etc where he cannot ruin the game for others.

Dlc is wayyy to far in Halo 5gs future to worry about enjoy Mcc and look forward to the Halo 5 beta we have more than a year maybe till H5g launches. 343 has said nothing on H5 dlc.

Banned for having too few faces in one post!