What do you think of Raiku?

[Sniper0092]

My book I've posted here, what do you think of the story so far?

[D-38 Boss]

Not too bad.

 

Personally, I'd post them in longer Chapters, and there's a few scattered cases of Grammar issues.

 

Storywise, it's pretty interesting.

 

Just keep it up, I'll keep reading.

[Sniper0092]

Not too bad.

 

Personally, I'd post them in longer Chapters, and there's a few scattered cases of Grammar issues.

 

Storywise, it's pretty interesting.

 

Just keep it up, I'll keep reading.

Spelling? Spacing?

[D-38 Boss]

Spelling, using the improper version of There (Their, They're), little things like that, and not very often. Just take a few minutes after you finish writing to do a quick proofread is all.

[Sniper0092]

Spelling, using the improper version of There (Their, They're), little things like that, and not very often. Just take a few minutes after you finish writing to do a quick proofread is all.

Ok.