Poem by me.

[AnimalDenWinter]

W O L F. 

 

The hunter was running.

Running through the trees.

Th wolf was hunting the hunter.

The hunter slid down a fire licked bank.

The wolf leapt over.

The wolfs yellow eyes flashing through the trees like traffic lights.

The hunter was scared, for losing his life.

Its white claws lashed and scratched.

The hunter had fell like worthless ash.

 

Please leave a like or post. I don't do poems at all so I don't know if this really is a poem.

At least it should be good for you. 

 

 

[Dog]

Wolf

 

A wolf had to run a bit

And he had a giant fit

Once he was gone from home

He was scared and alone

The wolf walked home with a bad back

And stepped on a big crack

He finally got home

And howled I am no longer alone.

 

 

Created By LIl Dog

[Is not JL]

@Wolf, I would say....

 

Too many sentences starting with 'The', and that isn't something you can emphasize through repetition.

 

@Lil Dog, 

I think if you made that poem about li'l dogs, it would've been better.

[BeckoningZebra1]

This Poem doesn't even rhyme it's literally written like this:

A

B

C

D

E

F

G

H

H

RHYME SCHEME-

 

The Poem Lil' Dog wrote on the other hand did rhyme:

A

A

B

B

C

C

D

D

RHYME SCHEME +

[тυcкєя]

Nice poem for someone that hasnt done yet one.

My teacher made me and my classmate make all sorts of poems,

I hated it I am not a poem guy js.

[AnimeAddict]

thats not bad course ive been "out of the game " for a while XD

[AnimalDenWinter]

thanks for all the negative posts guys...:'(