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Wam

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  1. Tbh, they kinda rushed it when they said they weren't going to.

     

     

    Controls have such an amazing workflow. Terrain pieces and changing of the environment offer so many unique options to make your map. One thing I'm in love with is the sound FX option, next to the ability to add visual FX, like fire.

     

    But the number of bugs is atrocious for the time they had.

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  2. Church's screenshot doesn't implicate him in the slightest, Wam. There were no errors in it if it was fake, and of course he's innocent if it was real. But we have no reason to believe either. We do however have reason to believe that you and he are Mafia simply because of your vehement defense of him, which I should remind you and everyone here that you are still continuing.

     

    The past games have shown that no one defends an unconfirmed that strongly unless...both the defense and the defendant are guilty. The chances of this being any different are very, very small.

     

    Well, I don't know what the sneery 'trends' of past Mafia games are, even for the one I was a part of, the last one. I don't care how you want to go about thinking it. In fact, you're not doing much of that either. What it came down to was that Church nor Drizzy nor Arbiter showed up on past lists, so whether i defend him is not an implication of either allegiance. Drizzy got off cheap and easy, and you're here pouting because I'm even wasting time on you.

     

    While you go and respond, I'll be tracking down the real mafians.

  3. I think you need to convey more of what the characters are thinking. You should probably sacrifice some of those lines of dialogue you find extraneous. Take the points in the story you think there is too much dialogue and write it differently so it isn't extraneous talking. You've got a story in your head, true, and it's developed nicely there, but you have to find a point in which to develop the characters, and develop the build-up of the plot.

     

    All in all, I like where you're going in terms of story, but it seems the story itself (and characters) could use some development, if at all, some.

     

    "The Private turned the corner hesitantly, only to find himself face-to-face with a Klorbinean. It was dead and hanging by its torso from the ceiling by some sort of ooze, but the Private didn’t register this at first. He stumbled backwards and fell flat on his back." This was the height of the story, add more stuff in that explains and less stuff in that talks. This is a good piece of writing.

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  4. Enough hunch jokes, Wam. I can be analytical when I have something to use for it. With this list, we don't so we're as blind as a round 1 voting session. And that means a hunch is as good a reason as we've got.

     

    If you'd all prefer, we could just vote RNG.

     

     

    I vote Arbiter747, he's been quiet so far... Here's my PM screenshot, it's not me!!!

     

     

    What was that you said, Axilus?

     

    I change my vote to Arbiter.

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