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Occurrence by FredR1ck11

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Map: Occurence

Gamertag= FredR1ck11

 

Players= 1-16

but since its a rollercoaster its less crazy with less people.

 

 

 

Gametype= Race

yes it works with the new gametype

 

DL for map= https://www.halowaypoint.com/en-us/games/halo-5-guardians/xbox-one/map-variants?lastModifiedFilter=Everything&sortOrder=BookmarkCount&page=1&gamertag=FredR1ck11

 

Race please use mongooses

 

Description: Occurence is a rollercoaster created by FredR1ck11. For a RC it is a very easy track. I used wider pieces so it would be less stressful for drivers. There are some cool jumps on the map. I tried to be a natural as possible. I really hope you enjoy this map! Thank you!

 

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The website wouldnt let me add my pictures so sorry

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Well the track looks pretty smooth and nicely forged. But it looks boring as hell. Almost no aesthetics which is kinda of a no no for me. When I look at a racetrack, I look at the aesthetics/atmosphere and the forgework of the track itself.

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The aesthetics for the track is the natural stuff. But in your honest feedback how could I make this more fun? Faster pace? More difficult? Please I want feedback on this.

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I get that the natural stuff are the aesthetics, my point is that they're boring aesthetics. Nothing eye-catching you know? Just a bunch of trees and that really tacky and out of place whale. The one area that looked alright was the curve made out of rocks and at some point, people race under that curve. It's 0:22 of your video.

 

Here's the playlist of my featured racetracks so you have an idea of what I look for in those maps.

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLUBEmYuWHUx02i0C2IPw3geenHlkcjKgj

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I get that the natural stuff are the aesthetics, my point is that they're boring aesthetics. Nothing eye-catching you know? Just a bunch of trees and that really tacky and out of place whale. The one area that looked alright was the curve made out of rocks and at some point, people race under that curve. It's 0:22 of your video.

 

Here's the playlist of my featured racetracks so you have an idea of what I look for in those maps.

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLUBEmYuWHUx02i0C2IPw3geenHlkcjKgj

Sorry I didn't see the post till now but thanks for the feedback

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