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Fire

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Hey Everyone, just a couple quick notices

 

1. This is my first halo-fiction so keep that in mind

2. i want your HONEST opinion

3. if i have a grammar mistake or a spelling error, let me know

4. I need an editor to see how most of it sounds!

 

NOTICE: Due to the length of this ever-growing work, I am uploading it to Google Docs.

 

Please leave a comment or even better a review :D.

 

Prologue

Chapter I

Chapter II

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Special Thanks to

Halo Wikia- helped with the dates and canon tweaks

The 343industries.org for just being awesome

Bungie and Microsoft and 343i for giving me a nice sandbox to use

Absolute Dog for helping me edit

Brony for letting be borrow a couple lines

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Halo and the Halo Universe are the respective property of Microsoft and it's trademarks

This story is the solo work of Ian Bossler and belongs to said person along with 343industries.org

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Good stuff, Fire. Well done, with a little room yet for improvement. I'd love to be your editor, but I'd need an actual computer instead of this iPhail.

 

I have to say that the augmentation processes have always been a point of interest for me. The medical science behind it, while a bit farfetched, always tickled my fancy. It only got more interesting with Chrysanthemum and the SPARTAN-III's.

 

All in all, I look forward to more about John, Cassandra, and her unique skin condition. :D Jokes. But serious, I likey. :yes Keep it coming.

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I know, this is me trying to give him a more human side, and i know it said he had brown hair when he was abducted (6) but i thought maybe it mighta changed.

Ain't nothin' wrong with that. And it's a fanfic, after all. Fanfic writers may try to stay the course, but sometimes deviations must be made for the sake of our own tales. :yes

Sorry I've been busy guys,

FUN FACT! i typed MOST of this on my ipod!

:lol: I've had to do all my writing on my iPhail 4. So I can appreciate what you've done there. :yes

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