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#1 Moose93

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Posted 17 July 2013 - 04:32 PM

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Map name - Granite

Download link - Here

 

Granite is a small 2v2 slayer map (the spawns are set up for 4v4 max, but i wouldn't suggest it due to the size of the map). The gametypes available on Granite are Slayer, OddBall, and KOTH.

 

Weapons

-sniper riffle

-shotgun

-concussion riffle

-needler

-carbine

-DMR

-BR

-light riffle

-frag grenades

-plasma grenade

-pulse grenade

 

granite v1_1  overview.jpg

granite  red ram.jpg

granite windows.jpg

granite v1_1  teleview.jpg

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granite v1_1   blue view.jpg

granite blue rocks.jpg

granite v1_1  blue rock 2.jpg

granite v1_1  green.jpg

granite v1_1  sniper.jpg

 

 

Please check the map out. any feedback would be appreciated 



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Posted 18 July 2013 - 01:37 AM

In the first screenshot, I think you made the two inclined blocks too steep. I see some other issues with the map that I can only confirm once I get to be in the map.

 

So I'll give this a download so I can get a closer look at it.

 

Expect feedback from me soon.


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Posted 18 July 2013 - 02:31 AM

In the first screenshot, I think you made the two inclined blocks too steep. I see some other issues with the map that I can only confirm once I get to be in the map.

 

So I'll give this a download so I can get a closer look at it.

 

Expect feedback from me soon.

 

okay, i will take a look and see if i can spot anything that needs tweaking.

i will also put the map in my fileshare, it seems i forgot to do that part



#4 Zandril

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Posted 18 July 2013 - 04:17 AM

Send me a PM with the link once it's in your File Share.


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Posted 18 July 2013 - 05:54 PM

i made some minor changes to the red spawn.

 

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Posted 19 July 2013 - 07:40 AM

First off, I must say that I enjoyed this map's uniqueness. Not a lot of maps are made this way. I especially loved the doorway made out of inclines.
 
I did see issues with the map though
 
- Path to blue: One of the paths to blue spawn involves about 10 jumps to get there. This is not good for the flow of the map. I suggest turning those into hard routes for smoother gameplay.
 
- Colors: You colored your map. But everything's green. I highly suggest changing the colors of the other keypoints of the map. This is for callouts and to help players identify the different areas of the map better.
 
- Windows: You placed windows in one of the structures. But there's nothing outside. If you're placing windows that players can look out of, make sure there's something to look at.
 
- Unnecessary piece: I suggest removing the buried cover piece under red spawn.
 
- Steepness: The paths to red spawn are way too steep. Keep inclines at a 30 degree angle or an angle that's close. You'll know that a piece is inclined correctly if players can jump up while walking up them.
 
- Too much cover: I think you made the two house-like structures too safe for players. The little holes they can shoot out of are too tight.
 
- No shields: I'd get those one-way shields out if I were you. I think a hole in that structure would be good for gameplay. It provides another entrance into that structure. If you were worried about it being too open, then you can always make the hole smaller.
 
- Teleporter: I suggest removing the Brace Large pieces in front of the receiver node at the bottom.
 
*I'd remove one of the tree stumps at the bottom. 4 is too many IMO

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Posted 19 July 2013 - 11:46 AM

thanks, i will get to work on the changes as soon as possible. 



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Posted 20 July 2013 - 08:31 AM

i have updated the map to fix the problems you pointed out.

 

changes:

-changed the rock pathway to blue, now you can run the whole thing smoothly.

-edited the colours for the hunts. there is now a blue hut, red hut, and green hut

-removed the windows looking out of the map. they were initially there to add some light into the uts but they didnt really make a difference 

-removed the cover under red spawn and moved the concussion riffle up to the pillar

-edited the ramp side of red hut. there is now a small balcony and 2 ramps down to the grass area.

-made the windows wider on both huts, blue hut now has a longer window too. it is much easier to get a grenade into the huts to flush players out

-removed the shields covering red hut window

-removed the the 2 large brace objects. added a rock for some cover

-removed the tallest tree out of the 4 in the middle

*- edited spawn times and ammo available for the sniper riffle, shotgun, concussion riffle, and needlers

 

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Posted 20 July 2013 - 10:45 PM

Good update. The map has improved greatly from its initial version. I can't give you full feedback right now because I'm pretty busy. College stuff.
 
Just add me on XBL so I can take a look at the map with you in it. 
 
That's also a more effective way of giving feedback.

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Posted 21 July 2013 - 04:43 AM

thanks for all the help. i will send you a FR when im next online. 



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Posted 23 July 2013 - 09:00 AM

Looks like a very interesting 2v2 map. I love the mix of all the natural and human pieces.



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Posted 24 July 2013 - 07:39 AM

Small, simple = Awesome

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Posted 24 July 2013 - 08:46 AM

Small, simple = Awesome

 

Not necessarily. I've seen a lot of small and simple maps out there that weren't very good maps. One of them was an old map of mine.

 

Not saying this map is bad though. Just corrected you. :)


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Posted 24 July 2013 - 08:55 AM

Awesome little map, I especially like the Jungle feel with the sunken-bridge, it's a really nice touch. Good job :yay:

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Posted 24 July 2013 - 04:40 PM

Small, simple = Awesome

 

if only that was true. a lot of my old reach maps were small and simple, but they were mediocre. thanks for the comment though, its nice to know my map creations are good and not sucky

 

 

Awesome little map, I especially like the Jungle feel with the sunken-bridge, it's a really nice touch. Good job :yay: 

 

 

 

thanks, where is this sunken bridge though?







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